v1
A sudden squall
darkness falls
amidst the fallen leaves
v2
A sudden
squall
darkness covers
fallen leaves
v3
A sudden squall
tugs closed-up trees
darkness falls
through falling leaves
v4
A sudden
squall
darkness seeps
into the grey
spaces
between the falling leaves
v5
darkness falls
dissolving the grey spaces
between the falling leaves
November 2003